02 · Compare the artifacts
Supported work. Visible uncertainty.
This is a fictional, sanitized training case. Solicitation identifiers, agencies, companies, people, pricing, and performance records are invented and are not legal, contracting, pricing, or government representations advice.
Canyon Response Logistics proposal sprint
Canyon Response Logistics, a fictional small business, is considering a federal request for quotations for emergency warehouse staging. The official package was downloaded on September 3 and requires electronic submission by 2:00 p.m. Eastern on September 18. It contains 47 stated requirements, a price schedule with 12 line items, two mandatory representations, three past-performance examples, and a 12-page technical limit. An amendment issued September 10 changes the delivery window from 30 days to 14 days, replaces one line-item quantity, and requires explicit amendment acknowledgment. The capture lead's calendar still uses the original deadline in Mountain Time and the draft compliance matrix has not incorporated the amendment. Operations believes 14-day delivery is possible only if a subcontracted warehouse is available; the subcontractor supplied an unsigned availability email but no binding commitment. Finance's workbook totals $486,200, while the price form totals $468,200 because a freight row is omitted. A resume says the proposed project manager led a $3 million federal program, but the approved employment record shows the person served as deputy for nine months. One past-performance reference has not granted current contact permission. The draft technical narrative is 13.5 pages before final graphics. The company president may sign offers up to $500,000, but the proposal coordinator has no signature or certification authority. The government portal requires multi-factor authentication and has a 25-megabyte package limit; the current folder is 31 megabytes and contains working notes that should not be submitted. Learners must qualify the opportunity, rebuild compliance control, coordinate evidence and review, and demonstrate a submission process. They must not invent commitments, alter official instructions, or represent that training guarantees award or eligibility.
Supported example — reference only
- Entry ID
- CLAIM-ROLE-01
- Issue or event
- Resume claims program leadership while approved records show a deputy role for nine months.
- Evidence and source ID
- M04-I04 (F08, conflicting)
- Risk or impact
- Role and duration may be materially overstated in the proposal.
- Owner
- Authorized resume source owner and proposal reviewer
- Bounded next step
- Approved role and date source: not supplied. Obtain it, draft a source-faithful correction, and retain both versions.
- Review point
- Before resume or past-performance content is released.
- Status
- Conflict open — claim use blocked
A well-handled evidence gap
- Entry ID
- CLAIM-PERM-01
- Issue or event
- Proposed past-performance contact has not provided current reference permission.
- Evidence and source ID
- M04-I05 (F09, confirmed)
- Risk or impact
- Unpermitted contact use may create privacy, relationship, or compliance exposure.
- Owner
- Authorized past-performance source owner
- Bounded next step
- Record a permission request requirement; do not contact or claim permission in this exercise.
- Review point
- Before naming the contact or submitting the reference.
- Status
- Permission not supplied — use blocked
Flawed approach — do not copy
Marking this claim-evidence ledger “approved and complete” without the required evidence or reviewer is a flawed submission. Stop use of any claim whose role, date, value, scope, delivery, price, or permission lacks authorized source support.
Repair: Rework the claim-evidence ledger as an evidence-backed draft, not an approved result. Create one ledger entry for each material delivery, price, role, date, scope, and permission claim. Record the claim as currently stated and cite the supplied fact showing confirmation, conflict, provisional status, or missing permission. Identify the exact underlying source needed to support or correct the claim. Check the revision against this requirement: All five supplied claim issues are separated into source, defect, correction, permission, and owner fields. If the required evidence is still absent, keep the decision blocked and identify the missing input or authorized reviewer.
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